Post by Arideni
The first thing I noticed when your armory loaded was that you're dual-wield...but your talents are a little backwards for your level.
Itemization is lame for Fury until the mid-to-late 50s...to compensate, you could put some of your arms points over into Fury & get Precision and Weapon Expertise. These are pretty standard & without the gear for Fury, it's no surprise your damage is so awkward.
You can read more about Fury builds & gear in this thread: http://www.wowhead.com/?forums&topic=4327&p=41787
The second thing I noticed was your weapons - I know it's hard to get decent weapons, but the thing I want to comment on is main hand vs. offhand.
Your want your main hand weapon to be the slower, higher damage weapon because your special attacks are based off the main hand slot. You incur dual wield penalties, this is unavoidable, but one of them is to reduce the damage of your offhand. Putting the higher damage weapon in the offhand is thusly a waste. I'm sure there's more info. on this in the thread link above.
You want your offhand weapon (as a warrior) to be 2.4 speed or slower for damage concerns (the exception to this is having a dagger, which would be 1.7 speed or slower...but there's no reason for you to use a dagger anymore). The reasoning behind this is due to moves like Whirlwind, which was recently changed to deal damage from both
weapon slots...effectively two hits. Whirlwind is normalized, however that only affects the attack power bonus that goes into the damage formula (there's another half of the formula which isn't normalized, thusly slower the better). White damage hits are not normalized last I checked, so there's another reason.Now for your talent build...
remove Blood Craze...it's not very useful at all, even for a passive bonus. Just free up those 3 points, you won't hear another warrior say anything to the contrary. Put those points into Commanding Presence, so you should have 4/5 there now. Piericing Howl is fine if you prefer it.
At level 40, you can get Mortal Strike or Bloodthirst...these are "instant" attacks, a brand new ability that will change how you kill things. All you have really are moves like Heroic Strike, a key element when leveling up...until 40. Get your level 40 ability & make haste!
The rest of your build was fine, but you really should work your way down to Bloodthirst. You *need* this attack & without it, it's no wonder you're having such a hard time.
Post by Arideni
My thoughts on your MS build, as I went down the trees...
Remove Imp. Rend as it takes too long to fully deal it's damage...put those points into Iron Will if you're on a PVP server. You can keep Imp. Charge for now, as that can only help you while leveling (you would want to remove this at 70 in favor of Iron Will 5/5).
Keep going down the Arms tree until you get MS (basically like you had it). You can get Second Wind or flesh out Imp. Hamstring 3/3 (or even Imp. Intercept, primarily a PVP choice). You may even want to pick up Blood Frenzy.
Keep 5/5 Cruelty & take up Unbridled Wrath when you can. From there, keep filling out the trees & you'll be done. Here is an incomplete template with the above changes included:http://www.wowhead.com/?talent=LVMhdAio0ozZV