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[Expantion idea] New worlds after Cataclysm.
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This isn't even worth an 'lol'
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Orranis
So, basically what you're saying is that we should spoon feed your e-peen because you made an idea that no one else likes, and if we have anything constructive to post on it than we should hold it back because it'll make you feel better?
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Claggi
I'm guessing this thread wasn't for teh lulz, so unlike the others, I'll give criticism... not PRAISE, no, this brooks none due to poor effort, but criticism.
First things first: SPELLCHECKER! By Elune, you want me to take this seriously when you cant even spell Expan
s
ion right?
Now onto the actual content.
Races: Alliance: Iron dwarfs, Doom Guards.
Races:Horde: Golem elemental, Infernals
No lore at all presented! Why are demons and golems sentiently joining factions. Now if you go looking through my work and say 'But you used Satyrs' I'll nod and say but I used Deus ex Plot Device!
You don't delve any plot to their relevence.
Then you explain the classes in a way that makes me wonder why you don't use formatting, overabuse commas and don't know proper sentence structure.
I can barely read any of the lore, its so poorly structured. If you wanna be taken seriously, look at wowwiki a couple of times at bare minimum.
Even still, there's no backstory, just BAM, treaty! There's no dramatic buildup, no excitement.
The way I write my stories is to watch the trailers for upcoming expansion (the recent Cataclysm one works) and I formulate overdramatic narrative as best I can... granted without a vocal component, there is no grab, but still I introduce with urgency of the introduction.
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