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It's a Long Story (Chapter 1)
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Dralas
A bit of a mystery plot. I'm curious to see if the reader is suppose to be the person in the story themselves ( which imo, don't wanna drift toward that ) or your somehow got to where you are, and you lost your memory... hmm..
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Patty
Yeh the use of second person for direct address is pretty effective :)
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Dralas
Just imo, the 2nd person thing needs to have a follow up to explain it and get to the 1st person eventually or 3rd person. That's just me though.
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